Saturday, 24 December 2016

Dirty talk

Hi all,

I'm writing a doggy-style anal sex scene at the moment. Part of that includes new talk actions. To stop them feeling repetitive, speech actions need a lot of potential lines which may have conditions based on traits, the sexual situation, relationships etc.
By and large, these are done - the general "sex talk" npc action is still in progress but the others are in what I think is an acceptable state.
Still, more lines is always better so I'm making this post in case people want to submit lines they'd like to see in the scene. If you want to do so, you can put forward ideas in comments here or in a comment or PM on Patreon or one of the forums I frequent.

Some quick points:
- Obviously I might change your line or not use it at all, so don't make any suggestions if that would upset you.
- The format is typically something like "<Npc> says that he loves fucking your ass".
- You don't need to worry about listing the conditions as long as they're obvious from the text. For instance a line like "<Npc> says that he loves making love to his beloved girlfriend's lovely ass" would tell me that it should a) be restricted to loving men b) should only be for characters in a relationship and c) that you really need a thesaurus.
- Non-rhetorical questions that would demand a follow-up from the other person are not suitable for these actions.
- Lines are just that - lines. They should be limited to a single sentence. No walls of text please!


35 comments:

  1. says that he loves seeing you squirm.
    says that this is his favorite hole.
    says that you were made to be fucked in the ass.

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  2. I think more lines based on physical body type should exist, but here are the ones for anal sex:
    says your ass feels like a couple of fleshy pillows around his dick. (womanly)
    winces and tells you to stop clenching your magnificent ass so tightly. (toned)
    says your ass is a much better fit for his huge dick. (slender build or tight pussy)

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    1. Thanks! Some good ideas. I decided to move the "stop clenching" one to a different action from the normal dialogue one so there can be a bit more lead-in to it, but I'll use them all.

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  3. (impregnator) "'s bare cock is feeling wonderful in your ass, as he pulls all the way out of you then thrusts all the way back in, but then on one stroke he thrusts all the way into your pussy instead. You squeal in surprise (and pleasure/worry/anger)."

    Obviously it requires a scene change, but impregnators won't want to finish in your ass.

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    1. I don't plan to have a mid-scene transition. I will be adding a possibility for them to switch it up in some situations during the original transition from the makeout scene. Impregnators won't have the likes_anal trait though, so it's a scene that they won't be accessing so often.

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  4. NPC says he wished he had something as witty to say as Cubano.

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    1. Brilliant :D But the NPC could be named Cubano...

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    2. lock NPC's with the name Cubano from anal ;)

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  5. ...snarls that he's gonna make sure you can't even sit down tomorrow.
    ...swears that he could keep fucking your fantastic ass forever.
    ...gasps that he can't believe how fucking tight your backdoor is.
    ...murmurs that he loves the way your tiny pucker stretches out around his cock.
    ...moans that he's going to completely (fill/cover) your gorgeous butt with his cum.
    ...growls in your ear that he's about to blow a massive load in your asshole.
    ...praises you for being the best little buttslut ever.
    ...groans that your ass feels amazing around his cock.
    ...grunts that your beautiful butt belongs to him now.
    ...purrs that this glorious ass is all his now.
    ...hisses that he owns your ass now.
    ...snaps that he's claiming your ass for good and he's going to mark his territory with his cum.
    ...teases you about how wet you're getting from being taken like this.
    ...marvels at how you're taking every inch of Daddy's cock in your butt like a good little girl.
    ...mocks you for being a filthy whore who gets off on being taken up the tailpipe.
    ...tells you that you must be a very naughty girl to get so turned on from being assfucked.
    ...says that dirty bitches like you sometimes need a good hard ass-pounding to put you back in your place.
    ...laughs at the way your pussy is dripping wet just from being fucked up the ass.
    ...chuckles that he's going to ruin your ass for smaller men.
    ...whispers that he's done going easy on you, so you'd better brace yourself.
    ...promises that he's going to wreck your little asshole before he's finished with you.

    Merry buttsexmas! May every stocking be stuffed with care. ;)

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    1. These are great! Thanks very much :)

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    2. My pleasure. :)

      Are you planning on incorporating the idea of a PC using anal sex to preserve her technical/vaginal virginity? Because if you are, I have a few more ideas based on that...

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    3. It's possible to check if the pc is a virgin (anal and vaginal virginity are tracked separately). It probably won't be possible to check why they're in the anal scene though - it might be to avoid non-anal sex (e.g. because of the risk of pregnancy) but it could also be the npc's decision or because the pc just prefers anal. I have written some content around him promising to take her non-anal virginity as well though, so if you want to make suggestions along those lines then by all means go ahead.

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  6. Sorry to be "that guy" but will there be the cheat version for non patrons this year?

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    1. SO put it to vote, currently stands at 87 for, 3 against. XD

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    2. a bit over 100 for and 4 against... I'm quiet certain "patreon version" will be released.

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  7. say that Tell your boyfriend. Your girl's asshole is mine.
    say that Tell your boyfriend. How you ended up losing your (pussy/asshole) virginity.
    say that Tell your boyfriend. I've tamed you as a well trained fuck-toy

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    1. say that Shall we continue until your boyfriend comes here?

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    3. I wish she talks with her boyfriend on the phone while having sex with another guy.
      AND
      I hope Jerk take picture of PC while they're having sex. And she tries to stop him from taking sex photos.
      But she can't stop him.
      She yielded to great pleasures. or She was fooled by his words that he would never leak the picture.


      I really want this. Please, please. Make this.
      Merry Merry Christmas : )

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    4. Thanks for the suggestions - I am including some cheating speech & descriptions in the new scene, although that isn't its primary focus and your lines will work well as part of those.

      Improved cheating content will come with the relationships update - I'll be planning that once that's chosen to be worked on. I'll have to see how the vote goes before preparing any new scenes along those lines.

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  8. Heya Splendid! Are you planning to make a "custom scene template" for us to add scenes to our games, kinda like what we do with NPCs? Or would that be too much work?

    Also I can't really add to the doggy-anal lines anymore, most of the lines people posted ahead of me are already too awesome. Have a happy holidays!

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    1. SO is going to make a template with which you can submit content. I don't think the effort required to allow it to be able to do custom scenes will be viable.

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    2. I an see how such a template would be good, but I don't really see a way of writing it considering Newlife's scene structure and the large number of variables that can need to be taken into account.

      If I come up with an idea on how to do it without taking up more than half a release or so then I might add something like that, but I don't think that's likely to happen.

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    3. Fair enough! If you need some help in coding custom templates, let us know, I'm pretty sure between all of us here (and on Patreon) we can crowdsource something you can work with. (I'm having waaaaay too much fun making custom NPCs).

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  9. Says that whore like you needs some assfucking to realize what little she's worth.
    Tells you that he loves to paint with semen deep down a slut's butt.
    Says that when you moan with hard cock down your ass, you're the cutest bitch ever.
    Mocks you that it's hard to be shy now.

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    1. Thanks! I've added some of these to the appropriate NPC action.

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  10. Sorry to be commenting something entirely off-subject, but out of curiosity, why is there no "do nothing and let him take the initiative" option when you're on your knees?

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    1. if the NPC has the trait for "rough sex" which is linked to "vigorous lover" and possibly other traits. NLCC doesn't specify which other ones give it possiblity
      http://freshestofsalads.blogspot.com/?zx=7a7ae3a50fcb97bf

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  11. just wondering if theres going to be a gang rape added for the thugs since that seems more likely for something thugs will do and guys can take turns on the PC in the blackjack game if everyone has drank too much.

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    1. there is no rape or non-consentual things ever going to be added. I remember S.O. made a post listing things which won't be added at some point. But it may have been a comment.

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